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The Eternal Knight poem for my english class lol

Post  Drew on Tue Nov 02, 2010 6:31 pm

So we had to write a free verse poem for english and I used the guild as inspiration. I figured I should share it even though Im not great at poems or anything.

There is no one like him,
so solemn yet fierce.
On a black, graceful steed,
he rides.
On his journeys through towns,
the commoners adore him.
He fights in distant lands,
in the eternal war.
Engrossed in his duties,
yet withdrawn from the world,
there rides the Knight.


Tis the property of Drew G. from the class that is the color green...

^^^ I put that there in case somehow my school saw this and thought I just copy pasted my poem from here lol...

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Re: The Eternal Knight poem for my english class lol

Post  Psy on Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:00 pm

There rides the Eternal Knight.

You sir are win.

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Post  Drew on Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:07 pm

Lol thanks Very Happy

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Post  STOMPKINS on Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:11 pm

ha thats pretty good if i had to write a poem it would be

im a beast
everyone knows
lets have a feast
the river flows
im eternal
but not forturnal
im a knight
and i will fight

haha idk.

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Post  Ruri on Tue Nov 02, 2010 9:54 pm

Wow Drew. That's pretty impressive. I like it.

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Post  Psy on Wed Nov 03, 2010 7:21 am

Watching over for an eternity
Thier eyes have seen everything.
Knowledge passed from one to another
The Knights can never falter.
Spilling blood on the battlefield
but not that of ther own.
The crimson liquid sparkles against
the shine of thier silver armour
Banded together by a pact
The Eternity Knights fight on...
(Eternally)

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Post  Ruri on Wed Nov 03, 2010 1:00 pm

What is this, a poem competition? Do I have to make one, too?

Pretty good, Psy.
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Post  STOMPKINS on Wed Nov 03, 2010 1:54 pm

what you didnt like mine lol
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Post  Ruri on Wed Nov 03, 2010 2:46 pm

Mm... I do like it. There's nothing wrong with it.
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Post  Psy on Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:19 pm

Duh its a competition Ruri...

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Post  Lynchel on Wed Nov 03, 2010 4:44 pm

Do like Very Happy
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Post  Psy on Wed Nov 03, 2010 4:48 pm

Lynchel wrote:Do like Very Happy
LYNCHEL WHY!? Crying or Very sad

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Post  Lynchel on Wed Nov 03, 2010 8:29 pm

lolwat?
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Post  Drew on Thu Nov 04, 2010 9:13 am

Nice one Psy. And Lol at the competition/discussion I started

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